tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8036550554413060199.post8251273785725843461..comments2023-12-31T09:31:06.356+07:00Comments on Doesn't Speak Klingon: The King Rides #AtoZChallengeRedhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06870283055927616591noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8036550554413060199.post-76403975069149955052019-04-19T08:13:51.334+07:002019-04-19T08:13:51.334+07:00Cucco - It's one of the sweeter stories I'...Cucco - It's one of the sweeter stories I've written during this challenge, to be sure. Thanks for stopping by!Redhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06870283055927616591noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8036550554413060199.post-63532494134725037722019-04-18T15:26:50.748+07:002019-04-18T15:26:50.748+07:00https://thevagabond.me/https://thevagabond.me/Thevagabondhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15982503101404966382noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8036550554413060199.post-21074554534036534792019-04-18T15:21:20.595+07:002019-04-18T15:21:20.595+07:00That was such a lovely story.
Ruchi . http://the...That was such a lovely story. <br /><br />Ruchi . http://thevagabond.me Thevagabondhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15982503101404966382noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8036550554413060199.post-67872622688541067142019-04-14T15:37:55.451+07:002019-04-14T15:37:55.451+07:00Gail - I have some darker, heavier stories popping...Gail - I have some darker, heavier stories popping up during this challenge, so I try to vary things. Test the waters of different voices, etc.Redhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06870283055927616591noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8036550554413060199.post-54565419454455425262019-04-14T14:18:13.311+07:002019-04-14T14:18:13.311+07:00Reminds me a bit of Leave It To Beaver, that easy,...Reminds me a bit of Leave It To Beaver, that easy, 1950s style of neighborhood family life. I did fear something from The Exorcist would happen and am pleased with the ending just as it is.<br /><br />http://gail-baugniet.blogspot.com/<br />(AtoZ Theme: very short stories/various genres) Gail M Baugniet - Authorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11543343067963247963noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8036550554413060199.post-79341384905224635172019-04-14T11:53:47.950+07:002019-04-14T11:53:47.950+07:00J - Yes! I can hear a jaunty little tune starting ...J - Yes! I can hear a jaunty little tune starting up every time the tricycle is in motion! Love it. Thanks for the suggestions.Redhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06870283055927616591noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8036550554413060199.post-43764158643272738042019-04-13T20:58:42.911+07:002019-04-13T20:58:42.911+07:00Okay, that was just adorable. That's a dreamy ...Okay, that was just adorable. That's a dreamy little story. I like the bit of "conflict" worked in (he wants another friend to play with). I feel like there's happy music playing when I read this, if that makes sense.<br /><br />Word suggestions: Moose and mousse. Ha ha ha.<br /><br />J Lenni Dorner~ Co-host of the #AtoZchallenge, Debut Author Interviewer, Reference& Speculative Fiction AuthorJ Lenni Dornerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07961335286982498158noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8036550554413060199.post-82060736204878330762019-04-13T18:28:13.892+07:002019-04-13T18:28:13.892+07:00Sundari - Thank you! I'm quite happy about him...Sundari - Thank you! I'm quite happy about him too, although I created him. I wonder what he'd be like as he grew up.Redhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06870283055927616591noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8036550554413060199.post-17433802408412797862019-04-13T13:49:00.911+07:002019-04-13T13:49:00.911+07:00Hi Red, you sure have a novel concept for your the...Hi Red, you sure have a novel concept for your theme. I enjoyed reading about Peter and his bicycle. I love the little, well-mannered boy. :)Sundari Venkatramanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16380034791641561374noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8036550554413060199.post-16632884256346045652019-04-13T12:31:09.162+07:002019-04-13T12:31:09.162+07:00rhodrymavelyne - Thanks! I'm having fun with t...rhodrymavelyne - Thanks! I'm having fun with this theme.<br /><br />Jz - That is hilarious. My first thought was one of those touring motorcycle trikes, but I opted for sweet instead.<br /><br />Liz - Always collecting suggestions. Until today, I only had one unused one that isn't a continuation of one of my previous stories.<br /><br />Felicity - Thanks! I felt like I was in his head.<br /><br />Maria - You, if I turned this into a novel, when he grew up he'd probably hit his rebellious phase with gusto.<br /><br />Donna - Thanks. I'm trying out different styles and genres. Before I started writing, my first idea was a kids story, but I'm too wordy.<br /><br />Brett - Knowing you, he probably would. Bet you would never call him "sir", either.Redhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06870283055927616591noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8036550554413060199.post-75580726616705798332019-04-13T11:23:59.632+07:002019-04-13T11:23:59.632+07:00Peter seems like a sweet kid, but I fear he would ...Peter seems like a sweet kid, but I fear he would plant himself at my house and never leave.Brett Minorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13181569922751252054noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8036550554413060199.post-92089662198351647592019-04-13T07:21:17.313+07:002019-04-13T07:21:17.313+07:00What a sweet tale!!
DB McNicol, author
Microficti...What a sweet tale!!<br /><br />DB McNicol, author<br /><a href="https://dbmcnicol.blogspot.com/2019/04/k-kimono-atozchallenge.html" rel="nofollow">Microfiction: Kimono</a>Donna B. McNicolhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15209611782116113024noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8036550554413060199.post-22785438433389735402019-04-13T03:55:59.961+07:002019-04-13T03:55:59.961+07:00I loved the happy, light feel you created. I kept ...I loved the happy, light feel you created. I kept waiting for Peter to do something really horrible/unexpected. ;) You've got a great set-up here.Maria L. Berghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05467454995491850206noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8036550554413060199.post-23209894237380763602019-04-13T00:03:27.343+07:002019-04-13T00:03:27.343+07:00What a lovely, cheerful story. You capture a young...What a lovely, cheerful story. You capture a young boy on a mission perfectly.<br /><br />Thank you for visiting my blog.<br /><br />Warm regards<br />Felicity<br />https://felicityburnett.blogspot.com/Fehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18344347287087639537noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8036550554413060199.post-32797567935422800512019-04-12T23:03:14.113+07:002019-04-12T23:03:14.113+07:00Very cute. He was a busy little boy.
Do you need ...Very cute. He was a busy little boy.<br /><br />Do you need more suggestions? It's been a few days since I offered one. How about left behind water bottles?Liz A.https://www.blogger.com/profile/16531953467834426316noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8036550554413060199.post-10198267565475563572019-04-12T17:34:45.957+07:002019-04-12T17:34:45.957+07:00Omigosh, this is so funny, because one of those me...Omigosh, this is so funny, because one of those memories that sticks in your head was me watching a shirtless little boy riding his tricycle around the neighborhood with a big ol' Burger King crown on his head. And he truly was projecting a King of the Block air.<br />What a hoot that you wrote this! Thank you. :-)<br /><br />~glib~Jzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00301793291285112859noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8036550554413060199.post-21619110864056248062019-04-12T13:58:29.259+07:002019-04-12T13:58:29.259+07:00Ooo, this is a very interesting take on the AZProj...Ooo, this is a very interesting take on the AZProject! Sweet story! rhodrymavelynehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12205976343207866410noreply@blogger.com